Poetry in Room 21

Acrostic Name Poem

Cynthia Considers books as great source of entertainment Yams I like Nice Traveling to Mexico is enjoyable Has glasses I love saxaphones, music, jazz, and photography Admire my room COMMENTS: Cynthia, I thought your poem had a great rhythm and made me want to know more about you. Jazz! That is so cool. REPLY: Thank you for the nice complement. I've liked Jazz since I was a baby. ~Cynthia	Joshua Jacob is my friend Oops, I had another accident Skateboarder Huge on tricks Underestimated Awesome skateboarder COMMENTS: Joshua, I liked your "O" with Oops, which was followed by "Skateboarder". That was a cool way to introduce yourself. I would love to see you do more with the "H". What does "Huge" mean? The same goes for "Awesome". REPLY: Awesome is for every time I land a cool trick on my skateboard I say, "awesome." Then, huge is for I pull off huge tricks like a handstand on my skateboard. Thank you for commenting on my poem. I made some changes like you suggested. ~Joshua
Rainbow Roses are my favorite flower Adore babies I am nice Never will play in mud Blue is my favorite color Oranges are my second favorite fruit Wonderful COMMENTS: Rainbow, First, cool name! I get the feeling you are gentle and fastidious. It is a very nice image. What other things do you like that might go well with the letter "O"? REPLY: Another word I like that starts with the letter "O" is opportunity. Thank you for complimenting on my name. ~Rainbow	Monica Marvelous long black hair One mom is better than two Nothing I don't like about me I dream to be a famous basketball player Can do anything I can do Athletic at basketball games COMMENTS: Monica, I can really imagine you running down the basketball court with your long black hair swaying as you dribble. I think that is a great thing you said about your Mom. REPLY: Thank you for that wonderful comment. I started playing basketball when I was in first grade. ~Monica
Richard Richard likes to tell rumors I have brown hair Cool is my life How I live with my mom A really tall guy Really like my TV Doing crazy stuff COMMENTS: Hey Richard, What kind of crazy stuff do you do? Do you really like to tell rumors? REPLY: I do like to tell rumors. I play with Legos, play video games and watch TV. Plus I jump off snow banks, I roll down hills, and make jumps for my bike. ~Richard	Blake Bakes cakes Loves soccer, football, basketball, baseball, cake Alligators are cool Kidding a lot Eats watermelon COMMENTS: Blake, You bake cakes? Cool. So, you are a joker, athlete, that will work in the kitchen. That is a great description. REPLY: I like to bake chocolate cake. ~Blake
Carlos Cartoons make me laugh Age is 8 years old Runs very fast Lose at sports Obedient most of the time Spiders scare me update. COMMENTS: Carlos, Spiders scare me too. I have a pretty good image of you, but you left me wanting more information. You run fast, but lose at sports. Why? REPLY: I lose at sports because I don't have good coordination. Thank you for writing this comment. How old are you? What is your name? ~Carlos	Jessi Jumpy Easy to learn Serious Sometimes Independent COMMENTS: Jessi, Even though you used very few words I really go a good feel of who you are. What a fun poem. REPLY: Thanks for the comment. I really am independent and jumpy. I'm scared of spiders too. ~Jessi
Noemi Now I don't like to run alot Oh! I like to learn math Excited about getting a new dog Make a poster of a car I am nice to my friends Monica, Jennifer, Cynthia COMMENTS: Noemi, Math, sweet!Getting new pets is fun. REPLY: Thank you for telling me that I did a good poem and I really like the comments that you gave me. ~Noemi	Iona I have a friend Noemi Oh I like wrestling Never like bees and mosquitoes A nice friend for me COMMENTS: Iona, I hate mosquitoes. I also love to wrestle, but only with my son. I enjoyed how you started your poem mentioning Noemi and then ended by saying "a nice friend for me"--that was kind. REPLY: I liked wrestling since I was five or six. I started my sentence with Noemi because she is a good friend. ~Iona
Luis Love having movie time with my family Up high in the sky as I dream It is not easy to wear shoes all day Silly and happy is how I feel COMMENTS: Luis, I liked your poem a lot. I can tell you are a silly and happy boy when you are dreaming. Thanks for the nice image.	Fernando Fun all the time Element is cool Rails are cool Narly when hit a rail Awesome board Numb when I fall Doing rails Ollie my sister COMMENTS: Fernando, You like to skate. I appreciated how you stayed with one theme--skating--throughout your poem. It was fun. REPLY: Thank you. You could print the poem. ~Fernando
Jacob Just as fast as a jaguar Am tall Can run fast Once is not enough to play football Brown eyes COMMENTS: Jacob, You can run fast. You are lucky. You described yourself well physically. I wonder what your personality is like. Are you funny? I bet you are.	Elissa Enjoys seeing family Likes to laugh I would like to be a veterinarian Smart kid Small kid Athlete COMMENTS: Elissa, That is great that you like to see your family and like laughing. Laughing and family are so important. Keep chasing the dream to be a veterinarian!
Jennifer July is when my birthday is Even nicer November is a cold month because of Thanksgiving Niver fight with my family I am nice to Noemi, Monica, Cynthia Family breakfast and dinner Excited with kids Reads a lot to be smart COMMENTS: Jennifer, Great to hear you are a reader! Keep it up and you will indeed be smart. You seem very nice. REPLY: Do you like reading? I've liked to read since I was a baby. My favorite book is The Pirate and the Princess. ~Jennifer	Asia Attitude Shy I like monkies Always sometimes mad COMMENTS: Asia, I think it was cool how you had some words that don't usually fit together like "attitude" and "shy". It is cool to be a little shy, but still have an attitude. REPLY: Thank you for the nice compliments. ~Asia
Elizabeth Exciting Lovely Intelligent Zoom around Angle and Fluffly I want back Blue-eyed girl Excellent Treasure is dogs and cats Hair color is brown COMMENTS: Elizabeth, I have a nice image of who you are from your poem. Very well done. REPLY: Thanks. I really like what you said. I am very intelligent like I said in my poem and zoom around means I am very fast going on a straight away. ~Elizabeth	Flossie Flossie is from Milwaukee Long time ago I was 5 years old Out of school on Sunday School is where I learn Sometimes I go to shop with my mom I am goofy, very! Easy to be strong like me COMMENTS: Flossie, Love your name, it is so unique. Milwaukee! Glad to hear you learn in school too.
Nate Name of cat is baby Always silly Tall is how I will grow Eyes are brown COMMENTS: Nate, I liked how your poem was quick, but descriptive. REPLY: Thank you. I also like killer whales. ~Nate	Shyla Shy and super in writing Happy because holidays are my favorite Yellow is my favorite because it's bright Loves my whole family just like they love me Always silly and funny most of the time COMMENTS: Shyla, You seem like a thoughtful, happy, and kind girl. I appreciated how descriptive and fun your poem was.
Natasha No spinage for me A new bike is what I want Tacos are really good A really nice person So pretty Has lots of animals A really nice friend COMMENTS: Natasha, So you don't like spinach, but do like tacos. What about spinach tacos? I would love to see you use some different words for the letter "A". What about "amusing"...are you amusing? REPLY: I am not really amusing but I can't think of any other word that starts with A. I have never tried spinach tacos. ~Natasha

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